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Post by яє∂ on Aug 28, 2012 22:46:32 GMT 4
Name Pyrostar
Age 24 moons
Gender Male
Clan Thunderclan
Position Leader
Short Description
Pyrostar is a orange tabby cat with orange eyes.
Description
This cat moves gracefully, with a calculated fluidity and his head held high. Pyrostar has green eyes. He is an orangey-red tabby, with white on his paws, underbelly and tail-tip.
He inherited his father’s bulky build. Pyrostar's pelt is a dark ginger with darker stripes. He hates it when his pelt gets dirty. He cares what his pelt looks like and grooms it often.
Personality
Very sweet and generous. He looks after the clan and if someone needs help, he will be there. When it comes to a battle, he won't say no to it. He will be right there defending his clan and taking others down. He loves his mate raccoontail with all his heart. But deep down there is evil stirring in him and one day it will come out.
History
Pyrostar was born to Cloudstripe[father] and Unknown mother. His mother died giving birth to him and he never saw his father. His uncle, the great Skystar, who wasn't really a uncle to him looked after him and made sure he didn't get into any trouble. When his uncle called him up in front of the who clan and named him deputy, he was happy. He wanted to become leader and so he asked skystar and he said he was on his last life. He had a plan in mind, Kill a rogue and then say that the rogue killed him and then he killed the rogue. A evil grin came upon Pyrostreams face. within the next moon he had lured Skystar out to a spot where they were alone, pyrostream said that they had to talk. I wanted to meet you out here because i need to confess something. Pyrostream said to his uncle. His uncle looked at him and nodded. Well i know your on your last life and now you need to die, it is your time to join starclan. Pyrostream said. The look on Skystar's face was just horrid but before he could say anything, pyrostream slit his throat, then clawed himself a bit to make it look like a attack. He went into the bushes where he killed the rogue earlier and then put it next to Skystar's body. Pyrostream ran back to camp with tears in his eyes and explained the story to the clan about how a rogue killed Skystar. Pyrostream went to get his 9 lives and he didn't see his uncle. He felt bad for what he did but he couldn't go back now.
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Post by Skye on Aug 28, 2012 23:03:33 GMT 4
Modifications
--You need an actual description not just refer to the picture. One sentence about his eyes, pelt, build, and any scars or markings should help meet this requirement.
--Just two more sentences in the personality
--A few more sentences in the history. Maybe add that he killed Skystar? And he's keeping that from his mate raccoontail? That would be interesting! |
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